Open Question: are my lyrics any good?

4 December 2008, 6:38 pm

ok so first you need some background, and this song is not finished. But I went on a mission trip to Jamaica and theres a lot of poverty and we set up a camp for poor children there, and this song is about one of the girls abagail. once im done ill record it and post it on my youtube page....http://www.youtube.com/user/ybbil204378 I can see Abagails story in her dark brown eyes theres a weigh and a depth to her stare but she wont cry but before her eyes start to fade to gray wish i had the chance to pull her aside and say Chorus: hold on Abagail, hang in there don't you know you'll make it out of here? but until then, don't give in this is one fight, you've gotta win don't you know you're gonna win? someday...... Read More »

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